Psicologia, Exemplos de Revisão

Exemplo de Revisão: Psicologia

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    Psicologia, Exemplos de Revisão

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    Psicologia, Exemplos de Revisão

    Explanations

    [Explanation1]: Clarity of information/content:
    Here the sentence has been edited for better flow and transition. Redundancy has been eliminated and formal words have been added to set the academic tone of the document.

    [Explanation2]: Clarity of information/content:
    An advance edit improves the logical progression of sentences. For example, in this sentence the contrast between the two parts has been clearly brought out by replacing “but” with “although.”

    [Explanation3]: Punctuation:
    The missing set-off comma has been added here.

    [Explanation4]: Clarity of information/content:
    “true” is an apt word choice and the word “mental” is in keeping with the subject matter.

    [Explanation5]: Language correctness:
    “depression” is the apt technical word.

    [Explanation6]: Language correctness:
    The verb has been corrected to “affect.”

    [Explanation7]: Language correctness:
    The sentence has been enhanced by shifting the subject to the beginning of the sentence.

    [Explanation8]: Clarity of information/content:
    The series in this list has been separated by semicolons as the sentence contains internal commas.

    [Explanation9]: Grammar:
    The definite article is required here to denote the specificity.

    [Explanation10]: Style of English:
    We have followed American English in this document. Serial commas have been consistently used throughout.

    [Explanation11]: Typographical error:
    Spelling errors have been corrected.

    [Explanation12]: Language correctness:
    “method” is a better word from the academic language perspective.

    [Explanation13]: Style:
    The capitalization has been made consistent.

    [Explanation14]: Grammar:
    The missing indefinite article has been added here.

    [Explanation15]: Language correctness:
    The missing pronoun has been added along with the correct verb form to maintain subject–verb agreement.

    [Explanation16]: Style:
    The unnecessary space has been deleted and appropriate capitalization for the book title has been used.

    [Explanation17]: Typographical error:
    The web link has been corrected to helpguide.org.

    [Explanation18]: Punctuation:
    A hyphen is added here to separate "self-" from the main word.

    [Explanation19]: Clarity of information/content:
    The appropriate word "thoughts of" has replaced "reflecting."

    [Explanation20]: Clarity of information/content:
    This sentence has been made concise by doing away with repetitive information ("thoughts of suicide and morbidity") and adding a clear subject.

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