Economia, Exemplos de Revisão

Exemplo de Revisão: Economia

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  • Manuscrito original

    Economia, Exemplos de Revisão

    Manuscrito revisado

    Economia, Exemplos de Revisão

    Remarks

    Remark 1:
    The original text was unclear; it has been revised for readability and clarity. Please check if the edit conveys the intended meaning.

    Explanations

    [Explanation1]: Grammar:
    A definite article has been placed before “market”.

    [Explanation2]: Grammar:
    Here the term “company” is used in the generic sense. An indefinite article has been placed before “company” to make the sentence grammatically correct.

    [Explanation3]: Language:
    The modal “must” has been replaced with “should” that indicates a recommendation/advice.

    [Explanation4]: Word Choice:
    “Expert” enhances the semantic quality of this sentence.

    [Explanation5]: Language:
    This sentence has been reconstructed in keeping with correct grammar (use of articles), word usage, and sentence structure. Thus the sentence is now distinct in meaning and concise in structure.

    [Explanation6]: Language:
    An advance edit ensures that sentences are enhanced from the structure and word usage perspective without changing the author’s intended meaning.

    [Explanation7]: Grammar:
    A comma is required when a transition word introduces a sentence.

    [Explanation8]: Grammar:
    The pronoun “it” has replaced “follower” to avoid repetition.

    [Explanation9]: Word Choice:
    Here “holding” has been replaced with the contextually appropriate word “seizing.”

    [Explanation10]: Language:
    The transition word “thus” has been added to improve logical flow of ideas.

    [Explanation11]: Language:
    The language has been made consistent by changing “pioneer” to “first-mover.”

    [Explanation12]: Language:
    This sentence required excessive reconstruction to ensure the information is presented in the most effective manner. The change has been brought to the author’s notice through remarks.

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